Recently, online shopping has been widely publicized and widely used by many people. Everyone is interested in purchasing items such as books, clothing, cosmetics,... because its diversified many items. And in this article we will analyze the pros and cons of online shoping
First of all, to have a general look at the disadvantage that the buyer may encounter. Fraud and scammers will be everywhere to trick you and steal your money. Online shopping is no exception. A typical example of that is a website pretending to sell some famous items with a cheaper price and after receiving he trust from the customer they will make those customer transfer money to them with compelling reasons. For example, this item is too expensive and they have to import goods with with their own money so make sure we receive the goods they will require us to transfer money to them. Like that they can get the money without further action. That's ascam. To make sure you do not cheated by them we will recommend the great sites sell online such as Amazon, E-bay or even Alibaba. They're all the reputation website. This is crucial information for anyone who is willing to buy online
On the other hand, online shopping has been offering a lot of advantage for those who like shopping. The first advantage is convenient, just a simple click we can get the items that we want without going outside in a bad weather. We just need to stay at home and a shipper will bring our good come to us. So simple and easy to use. The other advantage is that because internet companies do not need a shop so their product often cheaper. People come to online shopping because the prices are attract them, lower price with good quality. Hardly, had anyone find an online product exceeding its retail price.
To conclude, buying online for most wanted items such as books, air ticket, groceries,... has advantages and disadvantages. i think both of these thing convince me a lot but the advantages might be more outweigh than the disadvantages. think if you shop online many times you will easily avoid the bad circumstance. I hope everyone will have a nice purchasing experience online, in a safe amusing manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, for example, i think, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76253298153 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53923480533 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551451187335 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8728245862 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4782608696 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4782608696 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171912678036 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468723782523 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615742185909 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112794922211 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708312444131 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.