cashless socities are preferred being modern ones. what are the advantages and disadvantages

Essay topics:

cashless socities are preferred being modern ones. what are the advantages and disadvantages

plastic money is widely accepted by masses. Digitalised economies are given more importance in the era of modernisation. There is an ongoing debate on electronic payment among masses about digital transactions whether it has positive or negative impact on communities.
Societies used cards for payment of commodities or services availed. One can also purchase product on credit basis using the medium of plastic money. These cards are issued by commercial banks for their customers easiness and safety. The Government of India is also supporting and promoting "Digital India" which is helping in the growth of nation.
This mode of payment is easy for masses to use. Furthermore, there are various applications on smartphones that make pupils live more convenient. A quintessential example is that applications such as Amazon and Facelift helps a person to purchase product online and to avail beauty services respectively at their doorstep. The most prominent merit is that, it helps in saving ample of time.
Contrarily, those who argue against the electronic money have a different view and has an unsatisfying proposition. It is proclaimed that people ages are still uncomfortable and afraid using such applications being the reason of inferior quality and the additional; charges deducted by bank for such transactions. Hence, the negative side of such a phenomenon cannot be gained.
to conclude, despite the fact that payment through plastic cards has many meritious arguments, I assert that its demerits cannot be neglected.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4769874477 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07302166023 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640167364017 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2142553725 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0311442329966 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00965756329451 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0199311285085 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0189407244029 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232896867455 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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