In cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors. There is no longer sense of community. what do you think are the causes of this problem and suggest methods to solve it?
This is a fact that the face to face interactions has been declining among people at present. It is provided that people do not keep in touch with their neighbours and one day people would prefer to live alone. There are many potential reasons of this serious issue and a number of measures can be taken to sort out these problems.
On the one hand, Social interactions are decreasing day by due to dramatic reasons. Firstly, people have hectic schedule of life as both genders are working and they allocate less time to spend with others. Therefore, individuals do not even know who has been living around them. Secondly, In this contemporary era, society is under the great influence of social media and everyone has internet access. As a result, instead of exploring outside environment, people waste their precious time surfing on the internet For example. Facebook, Instagram and snapchat are popular social sites that allows people to connect with family and friends. That is why, Masses does not prefer to visit their neighbours and in case of emergencies they make calls or share photos with them. Finally, The relationship among members of the community are not strong in this fast paced world as in traditional times people borrowed many things from people who lives closer to them. However, Today people have weaker bounding because they overlooks social events. Consequently, it is hard to see gatherings of people on various public places such as library, amusement parks and clubs due to hectic schedules.
On the other hand, various measures could be applied for building strong relationship among individuals in a society. First of all, people must be encouraged to invite a lot of people in parties, weddings, and on special days such as festivals and celebrations. It is an effective way to make conversations as well as share their experiences of life.
To conclude, Although physical interactions are becoming unusual in current time, many solutions can be put into practice to build. a sense of community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05952380952 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71010538574 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4290288084 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72222222222 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160131581996 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049188078007 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378175667875 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895829501242 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485278356972 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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