Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?
Fitness and traditions are equally needed in the community to have a healthy and rich cultured environment. Games and public activities in the society should be offered by the organizations. In my opinion, I completely agree that industries should support the local community by providing platforms for sports and social activities.
A social gathering will promote the healthy culture within the society. The facilities offered by the organization can help the society to maintain their traditional values, which in return will give fame to the organization. For instance, the cultural dance and art play in the form can encourage local people to enhance their skills and brush up their talent. Furthermore, it will maintain the culture between the generations and allow the current generation to pass on the legacy.
Sports activity is quite useful for everyone. Providing such facilities will boost the healthy environment within society and motivates the people. The game events in the local community can provide the opportunity to the family members of the employees to interact with other employees and their families to have a healthy conversation. Which somehow will make an employee happy and improve the work culture in the organization.
In conclusion, the game events and social gathering are highly pivotal for the community. The corporation should support such events within the region of a workplace to maintain the healthy work environment, which will benefit the organization in terms of popularity and quality work from the employees. Hence, such amenities should be manufactured by the organization in the name of community services.
Comments
Organizations should improve
Organizations should improve the lifestyle of local communities by providing sports and social facilities. In my opinion, I agree that industries should contribute to communities as it will greatly benefit both individuals and society.
Firstly, the advertisement for firms can make by establishing sports and social facilities for residents and organizing the competitions. Hence, not only this event will be positively affected people, but also the image and the reputation of firms will have improved, and have developed in the community. The prestigious companies are mostly demanded as a workplace, therefore, they can hire the best choice for their needs and thanks to that, they can be easier growth. Because, if businesses have quality teams, they can produce more creative, effective, and efficient ideas. Apart from this reason, bot only companies, but also the countries develop with a motivated society due to feeling happier and more successful.
Another point to consider is that when having sport and social facilities, workers can daily use them. People who do regular exercises are protected from diseases, and their concentration gets high. Moreover, socializing increases motivation. Hence, the employees work with full motivation in a concentrated way, thereby increasing the productivity of firms, and workers who raise their efficiency feel belonging in the workplace with the thought of growing in their career. In short, this aid has a domino effect on firms.
In conclusion, contributing to the life of local communities with sports and social facilities by the companies have a significant impact on society, and their productivity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43023255814 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96221675123 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507751937984 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1401409243 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.071428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183031673734 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069089991043 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786358546124 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122172118313 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595884448049 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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