Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities.
To what extent do you agree.
It is recommended that sports activities and public amenities should be provided by the companies to their local surroundings. I completely agree with the above-said notion because although firms are private independent bodies, they are responsible for not only for health problems but also for the elimination of traditional culture to some extent.
Industrial companies are responsible for the harmful disease. Firms, which produce toxic chemicals and emits harmful gases while they manufactured their things. Owing to this, they should provide workout activities to their local people to survive in this type of areas. For instance, Ludhiana city which is known as Manchester of Punjab, the companies provides the employment to the local people, however, It causes major amount of air pollution; therefore the government of Punjab apply additional tax on them to collect money for opening gyms, yoga camps and other sports activities by which natives will get help to keep them fit and fine at free of cost.
Organisations are also liable for eliminating the traditional culture of their surrounded areas. Companies which are promoting western clothes to gain lucrative wealth are responsible for the abolishment the value of ethical wearings and social gatherings. Hence, proponents advice the local council to put pressure on those firms to organise traditional concerts to keep the image of their local ethical wearings intact in new breeds. For instance, Jalandhar city is famous for manufacturing modern clothes. However, the owner of this company belongs to Punjabi family, and he knows his responsibilities towards their society; therefore not only he organises Punjabi cultural fairs to spread the knowledge of their wearings, but also sell local dresses to natives new youngsters at very low price on that day. Moreover, people also get a chance to speak with others to share their handloom cultural wearing with the new generation.
In conclusion, organisations are responsible for many diseases among people and abolish the value of the culture of their local surroundings. Owing to this I strongly agree with that companies should give assistance in sports and social gatherings.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46198830409 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86269107153 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.5596766397 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.428571429 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234992149664 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947155677851 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063681945001 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174669799229 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441209805538 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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