Some people think that the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, modern technology is making individual more sociable is thought by some demographics; however, others think it is making them less sociable. I completely disagree with the above said notion.
Today, people not like to spend too much time with their family and friends to talk with them face to face. They would like to spend their entire day to chatting with close one through numerous applications such as Instagram, Whatsapp and Facebook. Owing to this, they are not giving so much importance to their personal issues. Consequently, sometimes, when they need them physically, they ignore them and always just try to connect via internet applications. For instance, one of my friend who recently met with an accident, who barely need his elder brother to support him physically in this time. But his brother just send him text messages and upload status to pray for him, and always busy on his cell phone rather than assist his brother physically and mentally.
On the contrary side, it helps to communicate with each other on world-wide via modern technology. This technology provides various websites such as Skpye to talk via video calling. By using this technology, we can now see them. Therefore, Family members and friends who are living in another country are able to keep in touch with near ones. If we have are not aware with this technology then how we talk to them who are living far from us. For example, a survey conducted by Cambridge University that nowadays, 85 % parents allowed their children to study abroad because they thought they can keep in touch by using of modern applications
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In conclusion, while modern technology made people busy and introvert, it helps to keep in touch with each other all the time than previous time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02027027027 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58763783313 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6939110929 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179535351835 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621671653383 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114945739189 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157273217331 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137967098965 0.056905535591 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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