Computer games are very popular in all age groups and nationalities. Parents think it has little educational value and harmful effects.
What is your opinion about this?
With the advent of technology and devices,the games are become a well familiar part of every individual across the world,here I talk about the advantage and disadvantage.To start with positive,the computer game can make the visualization of what can’t do in the real world.It will organize the friends who are not able to join with virtually and they can join in the online games.The games are giving relief from mental stress.With also, we can give the practice to students for the quiz games and it will increase their capacity of analytical and problem-solving skills.
On the negative,the computer games can not only cause side effects on a person's brain.But it may also hamper their physical health and can lead them to dangers,knowingly or unknowingly.These games are generally trying to make the people addicted,because of which players are no longer interested in doing other activities.The prolonged gaming session which will make severe eye burning and some time it leads to mental exertion.Consequently, it makes them obese and affects their circular system.Some cases,they have even proven to be deadly.To illustrate,Players under battleground like PUBG,an online gaming platform had a hazardous impact on a youngster when he had a heart attack while playing the game,as a result of not able to complete the mission.Eventually, he died,leaving a question in from of society that should these gams be allowed to continue or is it better to ban them.
To conclude,the gaming industry has been a pain from the parent’s point of view as they understand it to cause a deteriorating effect on their child’s health.We need to understand that gaming is meant to be fun and should be allowed by guardians as a leisure activity for their offspring as it helps to increase their mental capabilities and prepare them for their future in a more meaningful way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, may, so, well, while, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 937.175257732 168% => OK
No of words: 328.0 206.0 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80792682927 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69159877167 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 127.690721649 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576219512195 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 290.88556701 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.350164011 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.133333333 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103402539284 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374614884137 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375923089662 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634055952371 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00581703917747 0.0580467560999 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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