Computers are increasingly popular these days. Many people think that the advantages the computer has brought outweigh the disadvantages. What is your opinion? Give your reasons in your own experience
Nowadays, computers are ubiquitous and almost every home, office, or school has a computer of some kind these days. There can be no denying that this is because of a plethora of benefits from using computers. In this essay I will be discussing both advantages and disadvantages of computers and support the former view.
The most significant advantage is, our personal and professional lives have improved because of computers. We can do more things and at a faster pace than we could before. For example, we can operate our bank account sitting anywhere in the world because of computers. Some people who are occupied at work, cannot visit the store for shopping can shop online with the help of computers. Computers are involved in everything these days. For instance, teachers use a computer to write their lessons and get information for their classes. Also, we can communicate globally with our extended family, friends with the help of computers.
On the other hand, computer technology has its shortcomings too. Computers have stopped our thinking ability. Frequent and prolonged exposure to computers may pose physical health issues especially for children. The most frequently cited are visual strains, and posture problems. For example, a recent search by WHO has shown that a lot of young children these days are facing eyesight and health problems because of excessive use of computers.
To sum up, there is no doubt that computers have made our lives simpler. In spite of the drawbacks which we cannot deny, the pros are much more than the cons provided they are used wisely.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, for example, for instance, no doubt, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08365019011 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65633374231 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.077512447 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.6470588235 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132813153715 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508255292208 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051288857621 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872246890695 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415177649802 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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