Some people have the same job throughout their lifetime, while others prefer to change the type of job they do. Discuss why people choose to do both and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that nowadays, most of the people like to work in the same organization for their entire life. However, some choose to switch into new profession. In my opinion, to pursue similar work for longtime might be comfortable, but an individual will not gain any knowledge in other streams.
Firstly, people want to get in their same routine, since they feel very much comfortable doing their same work. Additionally, humans do not want to take risks and get into trouble in any new style of work. Also, they fear of new surroundings and do not want to adapt new culture. For example, a person who works for government organization, he/she will continue to work till their retirement. Almost, for 30 years they continue to work the same way and never get bored. This is because, they get monetary and health benefits for which they want to be in the same profession throughout their life.
On the other hand, many human beings want to explore different type of Jobs to break from the boredom of doing same job. In addition to this, some want to accelerate their career path. For instance, a software engineer who is working in IT company, leaves his/her job to invest in Fitness club, opening a restaurant, or at least to start his/her e-commerce venture. By doing this way, an individual will get to meet different people which can eventually help him/her to generate new ideas and venture into new areas.
To sum up, staying at the same job will restrict one’s exposure to new areas while on the other hand, trying different kind of jobs can lead to new career paths.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, no doubt, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70503597122 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49614370558 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6505839806 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261027640178 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097006353696 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641250555353 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158443333296 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278819832842 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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