Counties such as China, India and Japan have unsustainable population growths. In fact, many experts are of the opinion that the population ‘explosion’ which is now a very worrying concern, is the most serious threat to life on this planet. Give some sugg
Few countries such as India, china and Japan has experienced out of bounds population growth and many intellectuals believe that increasing population has become a real challenge for world and there are various impact on planet. I shall explain the reasons for growing population and ways to handle this problem.
There are various reasons for out of proportion population in these countries. First of all, people do not have understanding about the limited resources available on this planet. Many people think that natural resources such as water, mines, gas are unlimited and everlasting, resulting never think about the increasing family size. For instance, my neighbor has eight children and they believe that god has given the children as a gift and will arrange food, shelter, medical etc. on this planet. Secondly, illiteracy is another major problem causing population burst. People particularly poor and un-educated do not have knowledge about the side effect of growing population and also lacks the awareness to overcome such issues.
Number of steps can be taken to control the population problem up-to some extent. Awareness should be created among the people about the repercussion of explosive birth rate and measures to control the family size. Private agencies and NGO’s may help to educate the people on this burning issue and positive result could be achieved in long term. Furthermore, government can make regulation and laws regarding no of children a couple may have and violation should be dealt with sanction or debar people from taking government services. For example, China formulated the one child policy and controlled the population in their country.
To sum-up, growing population is not only threat to country but also to world as it force people to invade other boundary such as forest, sea etc. therefore, it is mandatory to take corrective action to control the population by creating awareness or applying hard ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-bounds'?
Suggestion: out-of-bounds
... India, china and Japan has experienced out of bounds population growth and many intellectual...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... can make regulation and laws regarding no of children a couple may have and viola...
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Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forces'?
Suggestion: forces
...reat to country but also to world as it force people to invade other boundary such as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, as for, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29487179487 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7100150294 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8654439467 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217644986062 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07679959838 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507746905791 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137084607603 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446364796426 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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