Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extend is this a positive or a negative development?

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Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extend is this a positive or a negative development?

Items under copyright are generally for exclusive users who abide by the terms and conditions of the copyright holder. Latest technology has enabled the people to download the copyrighted information, picture, music, books and so on without fulfilling the guidelines under the copyright. I believe that this trend is certainly not encouraging as knowingly or unknowingly, people violate the laws.
People obtain the exclusive rights on items after spending efforts, money or other personal resources and such kind of rights protect the person from copycat or unauthorized users. Downloading music or books which are under limited rights without consent of owner is illegal and violators may be subject to prosecution. For example, my friend used the copyrighted song in his corporate presentation and later on got notice for illegal use of songs without permission. Furthermore, owner who creates or invent the product for financial gain incur heavy loss as people do not pay anything in return of download. As result, industries such as entertainment, publishing, designing etc. go through difficult times and sometimes closedown the operation.
Not only the financial loss and illegal use but downloading from internet also disturb the ecosystem of innovation. Why would someone invest time and money in creating the music if it does not pay the return? These habits of downloading restricted stuff from internet dissuade people to go for invention. For instance, in Bollywood, no of original music composers reduced significantly owing to no control on web access. Besides, lots of industries come in conflict with masses when applying control on free downloading and initiate action against violators.
To sum-up, though internet is free and people have every right to get benefit from information available on internet, copyright information should not be used and download free of cost without consent of owner. I see this as disturbing pattern when people access information without permission or pay any cost.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...and conditions of the copyright holder. Latest technology has enabled the people to do...
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... invention. For instance, in Bollywood, no of original music composers reduced sig...
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...ormation should not be used and download free of cost without consent of owner. ...
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...d not be used and download free of cost without consent of owner. I see this as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, for instance, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44267515924 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91511934715 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0911222432 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257543739137 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798772470309 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592439935908 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159615152731 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479135439518 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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