Countries are becoming more and more similar because people can buy the same products everywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people can buy the same products everywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, same commodities are available throughout the world due to which not much difference exists between the nations across the world. I believe that it is beneficial for the growth of both the countries as well as the individuals.

Availability of identical products across the globe is advantageous for the development of the country due to many factors. Firstly, it gives a boost to the economy as foreign exchange gets increased due to higher imports and exports, resulting in an increase in treasury income. Secondly, with better trade, cordial relations are improved amongst the nations.For instance, after the implementation of globalization and liberalization policies in India in 1991, it has shown immense progress in its business and relations globally.

Additionally, the existence of the same consumer goods in the entire world gives the people a lot of benefits. One obvious reason is that, the residents of any country can purchase items, which they have only heard from their friends visiting different places. For example, Kashmiri shawls are now available everywhere in the world as compared to ancient times when it was only accessible to the locals. Furthermore, it helps the non-residents to experience the things of their motherland and make them emotionally strong.

In conclusion, in my opinion, the availability of similar commodities across the nations is extremely good as it helps the country to improve its economy and inter-nation relations. Moreover, it gives individuals a better experience.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50420168067 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16949347117 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613445378151 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.5341275716 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116810301785 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469904871244 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398188845898 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654556878985 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033628725567 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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