Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people.
Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
The number of criminal offences seems to be shooting in most nations around the world. While the origins of this situation seem to stem from three factors, several remedies appear to be open to us.
Perhaps the major factor here is the ineffectiveness of law and regulation. If the legislation is slow and manipulatable, the criminals would be unafraid of committing crimes. Look at Iran for instance, the average time for court to declare a verdict is 5 years. This gives the offenders enough time to manipulate with law and to find an escape. Another cause might be the lack of employment opportunities. It is getting more and more difficult for youngsters to find good jobs due to increased competitions. Consequently, the youth tends to look into other inappropriate sources of income such as robbery, theft and murders. Finally, the huge gap between the rich and the poor causes an imbalance in the society. As we all know, the rich are getting richer and the poors are becoming poorer. This imbalance in the society motivates the less fortunate people to try illegal ways to quick riches and indulges them into heinous crimes.
Turning to solutions, an obvious step would be to make the law effective. This might require increasing night patrol squads, having more fast-track courts and introducing severe punishments. It might deter the criminals from committing crimes and improve the safety of people. A second remedy might be to increase the employment opportunities for youngsters. This would inspire them to earn a living with dignity and stop them from indulging into criminal activities. Finally, governments should improve the living standards of poor people by providing pensions for the elderly and reservations in jobs based on family income. If the gap between the poor and the rich were less, it would bring a good balance and harmony to the society.
In summary, factors of ineffective law and fewer job opportunities appear to be the main causes behind increasing crime records. Nevertheless, having a strong and reliable legislation and having better job opportunities for the youngsters might mitigate the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, while, for instance, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16618911175 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89968515338 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550143266476 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8071016092 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8571428571 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.619047619 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172805662267 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523782602969 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050325081105 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117361272195 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329116547966 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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