Culture and traditions change from generation to generation. Why does this happen? What can be done to change it?
Traditional and cultural habits are constitutionally changing throughout the years. This essay discusses the reasons why these changes occur, and suggest some solutions to confront this situation.
To begin with, variation happens in any country's culture due to several factors. Firstly, the technological improvements the world has seen recently contributed to modification in citizens' behavior. For instance, family gatherings during local religious feasts in Egypt vanished owing to the presence of social media where people and their relatives could exchange greetings online instead of traditional assembly. Another reason leading to this change, is the influence of foreign cultures on the local populations which might make them acquire new traditions. The Halloween for instance, has been introduced to the middle east recently due to the cultural exchange with the western populations.
In addition, if these alterations were proved harmful to the future generations, a myriad of measures would have been taken to protect them. Initially, schools should play a leading role in protecting local traditions from disappearing by encouraging pupils to celebrate these customs. This can be exemplified by the holiday given to students in Egypt on the day of the Nile river which was celebrated by the ancient Egyptians thousand years ago. Furthermore, parents should remind their youngsters of the heritage left by their ancestors in order to help them cling to their traditions, and to avoid being negatively affected by foreign cultures. Thus, if young boys and girls felt proud of their culture and got attached to their traditions, their folklore would never undergo modifications.
In conclusion, local customs are undoubtedly changing owing to the rapid technological updates, and the influence of other cultures on the local folklore. However, schools and parents could cooperate in teaching the offspring the value of their heritage to ensure the continuity of their culture intact without being altered.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...was celebrated by the ancient Egyptians thousand years ago. Furthermore, parents should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66229508197 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94150442233 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613114754098 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7245677653 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.357142857 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205209763607 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708207319465 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646534466484 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140991371289 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842140071124 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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