Dance is an important part of all cultures. For this reason, some people say it should be taught as a subject in school
?Do you agree or disagree
.Support your answer with reasons
dancing finds its roots as back as the human history itself. it has always been an efficient method employed as a medium for expressing emotions, telling stories as well as conveying culture. For sometime now, the issue of integrating dance as a recognised course into the educational curriculum has been a subject of heated debate. While some are opposed claiming it would be an unnecessary waste of money and resources, many individuals advocate dance being taught as a study subject in schools as they believe it is tremendously beneficial. although there are some valid points on both sides, I profoundly support including dance in the educational curriculums.
As our global society has been increasingly deprived of its sentimental and cultural traits, promoting subjects such as dance as well as performance arts are considered as important endeavors aimed at restoring the soul of humanity. many surveys alongside worldwide researches have ascertained that maintaining and atmosphere of artistic influence and culture are vital to the well-being of societies. Therefore, promoting dance in early educations will in turn benefit the society greatly. As an instance of this, The republic of Azerbaijan is offering scholarships to pupils selecting traditional dances and performance arts of its national heritage.
On the other hand, costs and criteria for making an acceptable living is at an all time high. With the staggering expenses of modern life and the demanding professions, parents are rightfully worried for their children education. they are concerned with practicality and applicability of classes teaching subjects such as dance or non-scientific in the nature. these concerns has resulted in movements and often protests demanding for syllabus overhauls with the aim of functionality. For example, Poland has omitted the classes deemed unnecessary for productivity, reallocating them to extracurricular activities for after school.
To conclude, although learning practical knowledge is crucial to professional success, promoting dance as a subject of study can benefit young pupils. Not only it connects them with their culture and heritage, it can benefit their overall well-being. I sincerely suggest paying more attention and allocating time in schools to these types of classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60857142857 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13303530208 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602857142857 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8483834483 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.470588235 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233551908428 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668419359294 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376816030391 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127788300789 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550671765221 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.