Dieting can change a person’s life for the better or ruin one’s health completely.What is your opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.
Diet is one of the most challenging discussions in all societies. A proper diet can keep a person healthy or, on the contrary, an inappropriate diet endangers one's health.I will state my reasons in the following paragraphs.
It is very important to have an ideal diet with all kinds of foods because it will play an important role in your health.Eating enough healthy foods or eating too much unhealthy foods can both endanger health.You know that one of the causes of heart disease is a bad diet.Many diseases are caused by a lack of balance in food intake, such as, weak ,brittle bones, skin diseases and lack of energy To be happy, we need to have a healthy body and a calm spirit, and if we keep our body healthy by eating healthy foods, we will have a calm and happy spirit. The peace of mind actually makes you happy, and if you lose that peace by stimulating the body, then one cannot think calmly.
So nutrition plays a role in all parts of life.
People with proper diets provided by nutritionists can address nutritional needs and lack of proper vitamins and minerals.The relationship between fitness and self-esteem is straightforward, and research has shown that people who do not have good fitness have low self-esteem.Many are lean for fitness. This is quite acceptable. Because what we see on the surface greatly affects our emotions. Obese people do not usually have high self-esteem. Handsome people are encouraged by family and friends and this increases their confidence.Researchers believe that people who are less confident eat more food. Their defense mechanism works this way and they will not have enough will to exercise and lose weight.
In conclusion,I believe that a healthy diet not only improves their physical and mental health and increases their self-esteem. It also has a positive impact on their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, then, in conclusion, such as, you know, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97427652733 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93044085196 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56270096463 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 138.811139843 49.4020404114 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114850950606 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357327553555 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409544869864 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660032742142 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461558741417 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.