Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid farmoney
Every year celebrities earn much money because of their fame.
Some people think that they deserve this money for their ability. I
tend to disagree, I do not think so anyone should have such
excessive amounts of money. In this essay I will explain the reasons
for my view.
People’s opinion about that is famous people should earn a lot of
money because of their ability and hard work. My view is that we all
our own skills. They should paid too much money for doctors or teachers.
However children can taka many things from teachers or they may get healthy
by the help of doctors but they can not learn many things from well-known
people.
Secondly by the we may lose balance in society. People who earn much money
disrespect poor people. This is unfair therefore they should not paid a lot of
money for famous people. In addition celebritie’s children grow up easily
due to their parent’s wealth. They show themselves in everywhere and well-known’s
children may do bad things like drug or drink alcohol with their friends. For example
Mike Tyson’s son drink alcohol every day therefore he often in the newspaper.
Some people think celebrities life have difference with ordinary people. They said
that famous people should have expensive cars, modern houses and a lot of business.
They think well-known people work hard to become best. Therefore they should take
too much money.
To sum up, I tend to agree that famous people must live similar like ordinary people
by this way we can keep balance and we can create good future for ourselve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... deserve this money for their ability. I tend to disagree, I do not think so anyo...
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...or my view. People’s opinion about that is famous people should earn a lot of m...
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...oo much money for doctors or teachers. However children can taka many things from teac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96268656716 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37254756662 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526119402985 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7761585138 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1052631579 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0607758384107 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021241020658 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286049298054 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0212749014312 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291825077197 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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