Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many think, people who earns a lot of money are successful in their lives. I partially agree to this statement because money is not a measurement for success in all the cases. In this essay, I will explain my views and examples based on this statement.
In many places around the world, people earn money by starting their own business or a company. Such people can think earning more is equal to their success. For example, There is a place called cox town in Mumbai, India and It is the biggest slum in the world. National geographic did a survey in 2004 stated that 90% of this area people are running their own business. For example, one of my classmate established a small scale industry which makes bricks, his company is now exporting bricks to all near by towns and states. As, all his employees are from the same city, wages are relatively less and he is able to earn good margins and within 3 years of establishment, he has got a most successful entrepreneur award from the head of the city's business development manager. Small scale industries owner's are taking him as a role-model for the success he achieved in a minimum amount of time.
Athlete's practice a lot and represent their countries by participating in various competitions in their own fields and win medals or trophies. But they might not be the highest earners than the business people. Still, they are coined as successful personalities. For example, Serena Williams and Roger both play tennis for their countries, they compete each other every year in Wimbledon. Even though, Roger earns more than Serena for a game from contract deals,she is one who won many championships through out the career. So, Serena is said to be more successful than.
From the above examples I wanted to conclude that success depends upon the industry they are in. It can be in many forms, Can be in terms of Business, study, Job or Sports. Nothing to do with money all the time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73529411765 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60525155026 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570588235294 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5306578421 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7368421053 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05263157895 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129092976853 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475725860903 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605057069492 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961035027435 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06502501184 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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