Of course in the real world, the people who earning enormous money succeed in their life. But this wouldn't happen for all the people. In my personal experience, I have come across diverse people. In that, I have learned why money makes people popular as well as respect in the society. So in this essay, I partially agree that few people earn money because of their hard work as well as how they evolved and learned the things from past experience. But not all people, some people luckily gain the money by lottery or fortune without putting any effort.
To begin with why people intended to running behind money. Could you admit money would solve all your problems?. Money is just a paper that people could use for their necessity of life and culminate their economy level higher in other's points of view. In other words, just compare someone with real life, Sylvester Stallone is the best example to exemplify how money makes people successful. Now everybody contemplates how did he become popular nationwide. But nobody knows how the initial stage he had struggled a lot in the film industry.
Furthermore, in his tragedy life, he had sold his dog for $50 to one family. That's how he had survived his Philidelphia life. Moreover, while he got a chance to direct as well as act in a movie named Rocky Balboa which is written by himself. After some years, he had earned abundant money then he returned his dog which he sold for the family with contentment. Thereby, money is essential in everyone's life event if it is rigid to achieve.
To recapitulate, success doesn't mean having full of money and wealth, it means how you are making others understand you better and giving respect without earning anything from you. However, some people like HCL owner Narayanamoorthy and Bill gates who is the inventor of Microsoft are spending their part of the money for charity and some social activities. So in my point of view, this would make people successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, of course, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77058823529 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46157318814 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1325290008 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245655801786 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074235880009 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603320829563 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154365592839 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597867440661 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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