In the modern era, most students in European countries start their professional life before they enter university life. Some people support this idea and others give their comments against this. I completely agree with this statement because it helps them financially, and has a great impact on professionalism in the future. In the following paragraphs, I will give arguments for my support.
To begin with, before getting admission in the university, doing a job in a company, helps a student to enhance their professional and personal skills. Moreover, it will help them to understand theoretical topics and the practicality that they have already studied. For example, if a student does an internship in a mechanical company then he will understand the working mechanism of motor torque which he studied in his college. Furthermore, in the university it will help him to earn better grades both in theoretical and lab exams. In addition, interaction skills will be developed. For instance, if a student works in the management sector, his organization skills will increase, moreover, he will learn how to manage people to do a project successfully.
However, besides communication, organization skills, a job will make him financially independent and make him able to bear his educational expenses. A job experience assists him to make the right decision about which sector he has to choose for his future career. Whatsmore, in later life he will be a responsible employee who can manage work in an organized way. Again, an early job will help him to choose the best subject to study in university.
In conclusion, it is a contentious issue among people and different people give their comments from different perspectives. To sum up all the points above, I can say the students should do some professional work before starting higher study.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
..., I will give arguments for my support. To begin with, before getting admission ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06530948229 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.435046639 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176477765295 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059004297537 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047672360738 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109090024416 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448217752723 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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