In the globalized world, people are attracted by technological development. They started using it without understanding the positive and negative effects. Despite of using automation for peoples's well being, sometimes it is used against them as well. In my opinion, computerized improvement always brings good fortune for the human beings.
The success of a country is decided by their scientific achievements and showing consistency in developing new ideas. The governments prime motive is to provide safety to the civilians, for that each and every activities of them are monitored by them. Many individual bothered that the information collected by their government may leak but actually they have stringent rules and regulation to safeguard one's personal data. Moreover, to avoid security issues, most of the public and private organization fixed cameras in and around their facilities, to monitor foreign movements.
In addition to that, most of the improvement activities in modernization are carried out with the feedback from common people. To cite an example, there are many android application for tracking an individual, which is done by getting prior approval form that corresponding person. Even though there are major advantage in increasing technology, it has its side effects also. If the tracking technology is placed in the wrong hand, then it may leads ti chaos. Further, personal data of a person can be hacked and used for a illegal activities without their knowledge.
To conclude, technology is a gift, it depends on one's perspective, how to use it effectively. Being a responsible citizen, obey regulatory rules and amendments for the country's prosperous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ing technology, it has its side effects also. If the tracking technology is placed i...
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Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... of a person can be hacked and used for a illegal activities without their knowle...
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Line 5, column 533, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
...on can be hacked and used for a illegal activities without their knowledge. To conclude...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47126436782 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08859793077 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659003831418 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4803889617 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0683040365681 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0243342842906 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289098073027 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469809768998 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370069404777 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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