Since a decade there has been a spike in supermarkets and in large shopping malls and fortune companies are ready to invest more and more. It is unarguable fact that, as a result of this trend many local businesses are finding it difficult to be in profit zone. However, this will not have a direct impact on death of local communities.
It is a well-established fact that, large shopping malls offer wide range of products at one place including international brands which makes shopping easy for end customer. However, there are good reasons why street business play a key role and they can still survive. Firstly, travelling to city center for malls could be both time consuming and expensive process. As a result, the need of local shops increases and people still depend on nearest shops for buying daily needs. For instance, no one would like to go for fancy malls to buy either vegetables or emergency medicines.
Secondly, it is the trust they built over the years by supplying quality products and by offering discounts. For example, in my area there is a family gold business which has been serving localities since decades. Apart from this, if either the product or service not up to the mark there is a person in front of us to question in nearby stores. Wherein, with supermarkets it won’t be the same. On top this, regional stores can offer some discounts and bargaining is always on the cards. By considering all these, buyers still prefer local communities.
To conclude, although supermarkets bought whole new dimension in shopping by providing all goods under one roof and giving the tough competition to local retail stores it never threatens the existence of local communities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95138888889 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73053577477 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.078245121 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191522700798 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065240621349 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649093382672 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128182323226 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514716623786 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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