Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is individuals responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's fast paced world, people have no time to cook for themselves. This busy lifestyle has led to increase in consumption of junk food and eatables with high amount of sugar. Various researches has proved the harmful effects of such foodstuffs on people's heath. Children at young age are being affected by diabetes, ADHD or are obese because of excessive sugar intake. Is it mandatory for government to enlighten the society about the harmful effects of sugar consumption or is it the responsibility of individual to moniter their own diet is a question of debate.
A person's health is in his own hands, he cannot be forced or stopped from eating unhealthy food. An individual needs to be aware about his dietary intake and try to take the right precautions at an early age, rather than suffering in the future. The easy availibilty and cheap rates of these food items have made it popular among all the age groups. Furthermore, with the technological advancement and lack of exercise is a common trend that is observed in the current society. People should try and strike the balance between the two and improve their lifestyle for better tomorrow.
On the other hand, government too is responsible for the future of its people. They should try to educate the youngsters as well as the adults about the harmful effects of sugar, and the need to reduce it's intake. The manufacturers must write with bold letters on their products , the amount of sugar content in their drinks, eatables etc. Additionally, schools and colleges should try and explain young children especially teenagers the importance of healthy eating.
To summarise, with the growing rates of sugar consumption in people, it is advicable to take some drastic measures to control it. For the betterment of the society, the individuals as well as government should work together and create a healthy environment for the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98113207547 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75423204628 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569182389937 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5422763806 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246106947786 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744687993479 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054555289598 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146128019702 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610099610096 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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