Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people are of the opinion that education up to tertiary level should be free of cost and should be borne by the government. While this seems to be a great idea to help educate all children, free education will also have a major impact on the government budget. In my opinion, school education should be paid partly by the government and part payment should be done by parents.
free education has, no doubt, a wide range of benefits for the children and parents. It ensures that everyone receives the same quality of education, irrespective of race, religion, status or standard. Secondly, parents, who are below poverty line, struggling to make ends meet, will benefit from such a scheme. When everyone is educated, there will be less unemployed people and this will in turn raise the standard of living of the people.
However, free education will be a major drawback for the government in terms of finance. Instead of investing in national problems such as poverty eradication and saving the environment from pollution, a major part of the budget will be spent on education. Furthermore, this will make parents laid back and encourage them to fall prey to drug abuse, alcohol etc. Moreover, taxes will increase and the burden of education will fall on the general public. For instance, Bachelors or single occupants will have to pay excess tax without reaping any benefits for the same.
In my opinion, the responsibility of education should be borne equally by the parents and government. In this way, parents will be motivated to work hard and the government would be able to help in educating the young generation without neglecting the national responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77345286896 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.34310505 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17998811173 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741890788918 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544570025632 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119016663075 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446392781142 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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