Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Right to education is one of the fundamental rights of every child. Some people argue that the state must bear the cost of not only primary education but also the cost of the graduational course of all children. Whereas to my knowledge, the ruler of the land must take every effort to impart its younger generation with a basic level of education. However, it will be difficult for the government to bear the whole cost of learning including university education.

It is an undeniable fact that education plays a primary role in the kid's development and thus, the onus of serving quality primary education at free of cost lies with the lawmaker. This will enable people of all economic classes to gain literacy. Despite the costs of school maintenance and operations, it must be implemented for the future benefits of not only of the poor kids but also for the bright future of the country. For example, the late Chief Minister of Tamil Nadu Dr. Kamarajar introduced a scheme in which he offered free education including free uniform, books and afternoon lunch, just to encourage people to send their children for elementary education. Having said that, still, it is not possible for any government fund for specialized courses in the university for all the students.

To begin with, the cost of higher education in university or college at times requires a huge proportion of tuition and other fees. The main reason for this is such education requires specialized teachers, sophisticated equipment and infrastructures to teach the subjects covered. Thus naturally they involve huge investment which has to be recovered in the form of fees. To tackle this problem, the government can provide funding to the students on merit basis. In addition to this, the statesman must take effort to offer the educational loan at a subsidized interest rate to the eligible students.

In conclusion, it is the duty of the statesman to offer elementary education at free of cost to its public. However, it will be a burden to the government, eventually, to the taxpayers if the entire cost of expenses up to the level university education are to be borne by the state. Having said that, the government can still sponsor students who on merit basis and in addition to enabling banks to offer educational loan at lower interest rates.

Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of graduational course of all children. Whereas, to my knowledge the ruler of the land ...
Line 1, column 428, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to till'
Suggestion: to till
...ment to bear the whole cost of learning till university education. It is an unden...
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
...t education plays a primary role in the kids development and thus, onus of serving q...
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Chief) must be used with a third-person verb: 'ministers'.
Suggestion: ministers
...he country. For example, the late Chief minister of Tamil Nadu Dr Kamarajar introduced a...
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "requires specialized" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'specializing' or 'to be specialized'.
Suggestion: specializing; to be specialized
...son for this is such education requires specialized teachers, sophisticated equipments and ...
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ructures to teach the subjects covered. Thus naturally they involve huge investment ...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, whereas, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01842105263 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80081482999 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510526315789 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6796295154 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.176470588 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133971499789 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475844897064 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436502128787 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871629898167 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382663396139 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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