Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing nowadays. The governments have taken some steps at global levels but they got only few solutions, why is so? How can this problem be solved?
Climate changes and environmental degradation have become major problems of today’s world; although several states have adopted certain measures to tackle with the issue, those are not effective enough to bring a considerable change. In my opinion, swiping lifestyle of common people and working pattern of industries from local level to national level can generate a difference to our environment, indeed, it will take some time.
In order to combat the issues of climate change and pollution, many countries’ administrations imposed taxes on industries and other pollution generating sources, such as cars. Whereas these strategies were almost failed because their socio-economic activities revolve around industries and transportation. For this reason, it was nearly impossible to shut down industrial units and stop using cars rather people opted to pay those hefty amounts of taxes and consequently raised prices of products and cars. Therefore, due to impracticality and non-feasibility of those few adopted measures, positive changes in climate and reduction in pollution are hard to experience significantly.
In my opinion, I think if lifestyle of people, which plays a huge role in causing pollution, and energy sources of industrial units are modified, there will be noticeable change regarding improvement of our environment. Firstly, energy sources of industries are needed to be shifted from coal to solar. Solar energy does not emit harmful gases in the air, therefore its wide usage can descend the pollution level and ozone layer depletion, too. Therefore, government should devise energy transformation action plan and make sure that major to minor, every industry comply with it fully. Secondly, government should establish effective, fast and convenient public transport services in their respective countries so that people may not be urged to have their own cars. Many major cities, for instance London, Tokyo and Beijing have reduced their air pollution level by developing their public transport sectors which ultimately cut down number of cars previously used for commuting.
To conclude, in order to have sustainable solutions against environmental decline, governments should shift their energy sources of their industrial units and upgrade their transport systems. This will bring a huge difference to our environment and will make it more livable place.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69722222222 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0171065773 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3674341531 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.5 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160240778308 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052651057233 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314356554367 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976769314919 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373527813069 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.