Even though Globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative sides should not be forgotten. Discuss.
Everything has tow sides in the world, and so has the process of globalization too. The effects of globalization on the world economy are diverted.
We must acknowledge that the negative effects are from a different kind than the positive ones. Therefore the negative sides, like low payment in less developed countries are important to considerate.
If we take the Euro zone such as the economic changes according to the globalization process are huge. Many companies have transferred their factories into cheaper production areas to complete in the world markets. The results are rising unemployment rates in the “old industrial countries”.
In regard to the other countries on the world market, such as China, this job transfer is a big opportunity. but no one can deny that the consequences for the less developed countries where economy flourished, based on the availability of cheap employees are highly important: globalization based on these facts brings environmental problems.
Nevertheless, there are also effects positive reasons for globalization effects. In general, it is remarkable that there is a new tendency in “Thinking Global”. For instance, people are willing to learn more languages and get educated about other cultures. countries formally known as undeveloped, such as India, are getting chances to be the main leader in a certain field.
All in all, it can be said that the effects of globalization are enormous. The understanding of economic processes has changed completely. it is important to think in bigger terms, not just about the own country. The positive things that this globalization process has brought must sensible for the negative sides. The all-over aim should be a world in balance, but this has yet to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in general, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19484398073 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5319494872 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235273781992 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735510069252 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046435801127 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118878058157 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495775290743 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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