Current trend and life style is pushing humans towards increased consumption of fast food than home cooked food. It is a negative trend that has more drawbacks than the positive outcomes, such as, increased levels of obesity, less nutritional food when compared to the advantages which are more oriented towards taste and faster availability, and more varieties.
Fast foods are becoming popular than ever due to change in perception of people brought by evolving society. It certainly has monetary benefits when compared against the costs incurred for home cooked meals. This makes it more appealing to youngsters. It is not only easy to access but also offers more varieties and various options. Furthermore, people are oriented towards fast foods for its short time required to prepare, where else home cooked food involves significant time for preparation. For instance, a survey done in 2013 in U.S. regarding the fast food popularity, it was discovered that 65% people chose fast food over home cooked meal because it was less time consuming to prepare.
Fast foods are the primary cause attributed behind recent obesity levels. People are suffering with more diseases than ever due to obesity, since it has high fat content. Furthermore, fast foods have less nutritional value when compared against home cooked meals. This also causes developmental disabilities in young children. Moreover, 90% of fast foods are deep fried and prepared with unhealthy additives, which have detrimental effect on human bodies after pro-longed consumption.
To sum up and conclude, fast foods are more harmful inspite of them being more appealing and low-costs besides promoting obesity to a great and longer lasting extent. As such, fast foods should be avoided by people and gravitate more towards health home cooked meals as they are advantages for a body to be more sound.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...it was discovered that 65% people chose fast food over home cooked meal because it w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27090301003 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63312886804 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0718041127 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374177816729 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131062800133 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636823146104 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250712148883 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313047585875 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.