Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree?
To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous?
It is true that money makes many things and also is an important measure of many things, including people’s ways of life, health, food, taste, and access to important services. Money is an important necessity in today's society. However, some people argue that money is not everything because it cannot buy you happiness.
A good example of unhappy wealthy people are movie actors, like Robert Downey Jr the famous Iron Man who twenty years ago fell into drugs and alcohol. Although, he overcome this addiction, it was a hard moment during his career. Other sample is Robert Williams who died as consequence of depression problems. Both of them rich and known artists with serious issues and no good stories.
Nevertheless, not all the celebrities are unhappy, many of them have a normal life, out of public events, in an attempt to have privacy. Will Smith is one of them, he shows a perfect life with many belongings and a big family, sounds good don't you think? But even him, do not scape the real problems, like any human being.
To sum up, money and famous some times is not a perfect blend, but is not means an unhappy life. I strongly believe that happiness is something that depends on each one. Not body pay a price to be famous or rich, each one can be happy in its way. Life is full of unexpected events some of them might be good and some of them not so good, in the way that we cope these different experiences we can find our happiness.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'it is true', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221854304636 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.129139072848 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.129139072848 0.0946595960268 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0496688741722 0.0501214627716 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0629139072848 0.0437548338989 144% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0993377483444 0.122226691241 81% => OK
Participles: 0.00662251655629 0.0403226058552 16% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.42839293444 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0132450331126 0.0326793684256 41% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00331125827815 0.00163938923432 202% => OK
Determiners: 0.0860927152318 0.0861772015684 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0165562913907 0.021408717616 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00993377483444 0.011925033212 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1465.0 1933.35771543 76% => OK
No of words: 262.0 316.048096192 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59160305344 6.12580529183 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.293893129771 0.374742101984 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.198473282443 0.28420135186 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.125954198473 0.203846283523 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0916030534351 0.137316102897 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42839293444 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.56093040696 113% => OK
Word variations: 70.6910981933 60.7387585426 116% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7142857143 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8971253632 49.517814964 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 127.492653851 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.814263465372 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 38.5616139586 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.35616438356 1.69124875643 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33985935181 0.332605444948 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0819104998599 0.102741220458 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0711623236803 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.505499879183 0.534860350844 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137723152249 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118886369258 0.134430193775 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586662225336 0.0742795772207 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.205492497833 0.324371583561 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0613007652733 0.0638462369009 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216650502685 0.228012699653 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310265906864 0.058150111329 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.