Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree?
To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous?
Fame and money is something that has been showed by magazines and newspapers as a perfect combination. However, there are a lot artist, actors and singers that are really unhappy in spite that they have popularity and an extravagant existence. But also exist true and good stories regarding to celebrities that have an excessive fortune and a beautiful life.
Firstly, be famous is not good at all, some of these people have not privacy and living under pressure, like it was the case of Robert William who before of his death, it happened by plenty critical situations that were published by all the social networks. Everybody can know that it was occurring with him through all the news illustrated. Although, many argued that he lived a good moments, his end it was as a consequence of depress problems that maybe were caused by eccentricities and other problems.
On the other hand, a few glamorous societies can deal with these kinds of lifestyle issues; it found the way to manage the abundance and their position into the community. They get married and children, and although, it has to work hard to keep this high class, they still have time to share with their family. Will smith and his family are a great example of lovely superstars.
To sump up, I believe that be a vogue and wealthy person are not the best blend in order to have a excellent way of life, but does not mean an unfortunately experience. I consider that happiness it depends on us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hough, many argued that he lived a good moments, his end it was as a consequence of dep...
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...xcellent way of life, but does not mean an unfortunately experience. I consider that happiness it depends o...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'regarding', 'so', 'still', 'as to', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209219858156 0.247107183377 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.170212765957 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0921985815603 0.0946595960268 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0354609929078 0.0501214627716 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0709219858156 0.0437548338989 162% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.117021276596 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.031914893617 0.0403226058552 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65182305732 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0248226950355 0.0326793684256 76% => OK
Particles: 0.00354609929078 0.00163938923432 216% => OK
Determiners: 0.0886524822695 0.0861772015684 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0106382978723 0.021408717616 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0212765957447 0.011925033212 178% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1470.0 1933.35771543 76% => OK
No of words: 256.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7421875 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30078125 0.374742101984 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23046875 0.28420135186 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1640625 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1328125 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65182305732 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62890625 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 69.0372826177 60.7387585426 114% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2727272727 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3948593871 49.517814964 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.636363636 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 0.814263465372 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 46.3196022727 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.29487179487 1.69124875643 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260814559312 0.332605444948 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0898645199934 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0423655803722 0.0668466124924 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.597473805602 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156514863522 0.148594505496 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108753439159 0.134430193775 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505524753343 0.0742795772207 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.203795175137 0.324371583561 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0146523423072 0.0638462369009 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166791770784 0.228012699653 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451730558263 0.058150111329 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.