Some people believe that children leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant experience from your experience.
How many children spend their leisure time always has been a topic discussed by societies. Some argue that this time should be mostly spent on educational activities, on the contrary it will be an unuseful time. However, I believe that such moment is extremly valuable for kids´learning, whereby must be managed and controled properly. A viable way is through the mix among learning and recreational activities.
Kids develop skills at any moment in their lives, and a good proportion of their physical and mental abilities are learned in games. For instance, groupal events where they play and have interaction with other kids, encourage them to adapt to different environment developing communication skills. But, for having better results, it is necessary to add learning activities like reading a book. This complementary action combined with playing with other kids, it would help to the little ones in their education.
Additionally, involve children in sports is a successful way to educate and to create discipline in them. Sport activities are extremly benefit for kids and it is an alternative way to add values in them. Despite, that many of these activities are also considered educational, it is notable how kids enjoy them. However, children always need a time off to recover, otherwise, they migh get sick. Therefore children leisure time should go monitored in order that be productive and they can get a better learning avoiding bad consequences.
To sum up, how children spend their break time, it will depent on their weakness and improvement opportunities which nowadays are determined by doctors or any specialist in the field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27547169811 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00374514066 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.586348893 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.8571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173573810053 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584786603893 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371022950857 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101523472839 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473271769207 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.