Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
education brings great benefits to communities. while some people think that educated people are the most valuable to society, I disagree with them because both educated and non-educated are of the same importance to society.
Admittedly, educated people are of great value for society, but not the most important. both educated and non-educated are at the same level of importance to society because nations need everybody’s efforts to develop. while doctors are important to take care of people’s health, builders are needed to build homes. If there are no builders to build new homes, governments will face many problems to accommodate the increasing population. Definitely, educated people can lead nations' progression because education gives them a broader vision than illiterate ones. However, workers are required for the execution of any future plans as they are the hard workers who will make these plans achieved. Therefore, although educated citizens are highly valuable for society, they are not the most important because workers are of the same importance.
there are many skills that laborers can learn to benefit their societies. The majority of cleaners are taught the standards of cleaning by experience not in schools. cleaners play a key role in society because without them people might face many problems that may lead to public health issues or environmental disasters. In Lebanon, Lebanese people protested many times in 2018 to force the government to solve the problem of accumulated rubbish in the streets due to the shortage of cleaners. Furthermore, construction is also from skills that can be learned by experience. many workers, such as builders, plumbers, and carpenters, are trained in construction sites not in universities. these laborers play a key part in building houses and infrastructures, so they bring about great benefits for society by these skills.
In conclusion, although many people think that educated persons are the most valuable for society, I believe that they are of great importance but not the most important. This is because laborers are at the same level of importance as their skills bring great benefits to societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45930232558 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93274048268 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482558139535 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3085167916 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105921885746 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362657504315 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316178726444 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684306992017 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103398499218 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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