Some people say it is a good idea for all employees to wear a uniform at work.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, uniforms are widely worn in different fields of contemporary businesses. Personally, I totally agree that uniforms are important for the workplace due to various reasons. Not only do uniforms help bring a sense of loyalty to employees, but they also give a professional image to them.
To begin with, uniforms give companies' workers a feeling of belonging. In other words, they would feel that they are an essential part of their companies because uniforms give them a sense of identity; hence, this can build a positive team spirit in their workplace. As a result, they will be more active and their productivity might be increased. For example, military soldiers usually wear uniforms in order to distinguish themselves from other civilians and fortify their feeling of unity. Therefore, dress codes are important in the workplace because they strengthen the loyalty perception of the staff.
In addition, uniforms give a professional look to the workforce. For this reason, customers may be positively impressed when they see workers in the same form for the first time. this positive impression would build a sense of confidence while clients interact with these employees. For instance, in order that Pfizer wants its employees to look professional in front of their customers, it applies a strict dress code to all staff members. Thus, uniforms are paramount at work due to the fact that they give a professional feeling to buyers.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I completely believe that uniforms are important at work. this is because they help personnel feel loyal to their companies, and they give them a professional look in front of their customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24723247232 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87383996926 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538745387454 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0851222024 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135238768749 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055214948234 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447618603952 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945915497023 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325628283296 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.