It is sometimes argued that overseas should changed more than residents for visiting important monuments. For my side I think it is unfair and it also discourage tourists to visit the place. Therefore, completely disagree with the idea.
The standard justification nation should maintain all the cost for maintaining any local attraction. It is true that local residences are normally contribute in it by taxi. On the other side foreign visitor also have to pay for foods, tourist guide, transportation, accommodation. That one also helps countries economically. So, I think government should encourage overseas to visit instead of charging high. For example, Vietnam always charging equal for all the tourist. It proved beneficial for them.
I also reckon that if tourist of overseas know that their charge high maybe they will not get interested to visit. That will make wrong impression about country. As foreign visitor contributes on economic sector that one will also happened. For instance, Dubai is one of the most beautiful tourist places all over the world now. They are also charging equal for all and its help them to get EXPO 2020 mission.
In conclusion, I believe that, all the afford should be made for all reacting tourist for overseas not for charging high.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'discourages'?
Suggestion: discourages
...y side I think it is unfair and it also discourage tourists to visit the place. Therefore,...
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Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
...true that local residences are normally contribute in it by taxi. On the other side foreig...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rist. It proved beneficial for them. I also reckon that if tourist of oversea...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ll make wrong impression about country. As foreign visitor contributes on economic...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...s on economic sector that one will also happened. For instance, Dubai is one of the most...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... help them to get EXPO 2020 mission. In conclusion, I believe that, all the a...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... In conclusion, I believe that, all the afford should be made for all reacting tourist...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, as for, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20673076923 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76133606902 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600961538462 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5235007823 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.6875 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183902504543 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639378560629 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520004995749 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122778701299 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438963586908 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.05 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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