When it comes to choosing the destination for a vacation, it is no doubt that the process of narrowing down the place sounds overwhelming to many. Some say people are more likely to consider spending holidays within their own country rather than travelling to offshore places. Given the exposure and experiences one can get while spending time at places other than their motherland, I disagree that, in future, tourists are more likely to prefer going on a tour in their own country to travelling abroad on holiday.
I will first discuss about the exposure that international tours can offer. There are many modes of transport such as airplanes, ships, and trains available to travel to any part of the world. If I were to travel within my own country, I would rather focus on reaching the destination at the earliest than stressing about the travel experience that took me to the desired location. But, the recent journey I had on a Cruise ship changed my perspective of the importance of this part of the holiday. Also, different lifestyles one can witness and the cultures one can experience matter a lot.
Secondly, exposure to multitude of climates is another reason I think everyone would love to travel abroad than their own country. Most of the countries experience the same climate cycles. For a person who is from a tropical country like India, witnessing snowfall and roads filled with snow blocks is not a reality whereas snowfall is not uncommon to folks from countries like Canada. So, when choosing a destination for a holiday, international places can be a great choice.
To conclude, it is a personal choice of any individual to determine the objective of their trip. While visiting places within one's own country is not a bad idea, I think that will end up in forcing to choose from limited options. Additionally, one would not be able to explore all the possibilities that the world has to offer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...than their motherland, I disagree that, in future, tourists are more likely to prefer goi...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'choosing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: choosing
...ea, I think that will end up in forcing to choose from limited options. Additionally, one...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, as to, i think, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86890243902 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73291669386 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545731707317 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.25796817 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.466666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300088363573 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898103211318 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899994924845 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179127496879 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102194499062 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.