In the future more people will choose to go on a holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree.
Exploring new locations has always been an innate desire of humans. Many a new place was discovered just because someone wanted to sail to far-off lands. Critics argue that the pandemic effects will be devastating for the tourism industry. As a consequence, people in the future will prefer holidays in their own country and thus avoid international travel. While there are detrimental impacts of travelling abroad currently, I disagree entirely that international holidays will become a thing of the past and that people will spend vacations only in their own countries.
One of the significant factors considered while planning a vacation is the change in environment. People across the globe want to get away from their local surroundings in need of a pleasant change. Therefore, many holiday-goers from smaller sized countries prefer to choose vacation spots which have climate and topography different from their nation. Not only do vacation-goers living in the plains want to visit the mountains or sea beaches, but also nationals from colder countries want to visit warmer regions and vice-versa. To illustrate with an example, a recent poll conducted by the Lonely Planet magazine resulted in more than 95% of travellers preferred spending holidays in a foreign location that a local one, citing the change in weather as the vital factor in their decision.
Another reason contributing to the growth of international holidays is the charm of experiencing different cultures. Furthermore, travelling to locations that have a diverse historical background and lifestyle is a fascinating experience in itself. Not only does this help broaden one's horizon, but also teaches humility when privileged travellers see people striving for success in a not-so-developed society. In addition, holidays to places that were once thriving civilizations also gives a perspective on the fleeting nature of power. The quest for experiences like these has therefore given rise to a variety of holiday packages to choose. For example, Cox & Kings, one of the world's leading tourism operators, offers holidays not only to historical locations but also customized packages for volunteering activities in underdeveloped nations.
To sum up, it is fair to state that the tourism industry through currently hit with many flying restrictions, will rise back to its glorious heights once the world recovers from the Covid-19 virus. Moreover, holiday-goers will continue to trot the globe to explore different locales and will not be constrained to travel only in their native places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to vacation'
Suggestion: to vacation
...maller sized countries prefer to choose vacation spots which have climate and topography...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...itself. Not only does this help broaden ones horizon, but also teaches humility when...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heights once the world recovers from the Covid-19 virus. Moreover, holiday-goers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.435 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03246406975 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5925 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8442307688 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.777777778 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329803524705 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958913278761 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10777849074 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190465835696 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840287031552 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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