Hello Brad,
I hope you have been doing great. I am writing this letter to acknowledge that I have received your letter and to let you know how excited I am about your visit to my country, India. India is known for its diverse culture and I am sure that you are going to enjoying your stay and experience great hospitality.
Firstly, let me answer your question about the ideal times to visit India. India being a tropical country, hosts extreme temperatures of hot and cold with a chance for you to experience almost all the seasons Summer, Monsoon, Winter. As you are coming from Canada, known for its cold climates, I would suggest you to plan your travel during April so that you get to experience the holiday season here.
As April also happens to be the timeframe where most of the children enjoy their Summer vacation, you would find all the tourist places to be full of life. Also, I remember our conversations about the architecture and history of our cultures so you should definitely pay a visit to Jaipur, also known as Pink City. It is known for its Forts, and picturesque view from the forts. Don't hesitate to hire a local tourist guide.
Once you are done enjoying the beauty of Jaipur city, I would want you to visit my home located in New Delhi, 200 kilometers away from Jaipur. We can enjoy the home delicacies and roam around the city to explore the Capital City of the country. I will be thrilled to have you here and I can't wait to meet you.
Yours friendly
Shyam
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going to enjoy'?
Suggestion: going to enjoy
...erse culture and I am sure that you are going to enjoying your stay and experience great hospital...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 380, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...s, and picturesque view from the forts. Dont hesitate to hire a local tourist guide....
^^^^
Line 9, column 288, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...will be thrilled to have you here and I cant wait to meet you. Yours friendly Sh...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54243542435 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36311069417 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3616392411 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9285714286 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151145220432 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609306317952 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696683314578 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877449435552 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554423965134 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going to enjoy'?
Suggestion: going to enjoy
...erse culture and I am sure that you are going to enjoying your stay and experience great hospital...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 380, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...s, and picturesque view from the forts. Dont hesitate to hire a local tourist guide....
^^^^
Line 9, column 288, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...will be thrilled to have you here and I cant wait to meet you. Yours friendly Sh...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54243542435 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36311069417 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3616392411 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9285714286 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151145220432 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609306317952 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696683314578 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877449435552 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554423965134 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.