Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time Tell him the best time of the year to come What places they could visit Invite them to come to your house

Essay topics:

Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time.
- Tell him the best time of the year to come.
- What places they could visit
- Invite them to come to your house

Dear Mark,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and in best of spirits. I couldn't express through words how much i get excited when I heard the news that you're planning to visit India soon. I was a long time ago since we met and there is so much to share with you. I advise you that you should schedule your trip in season of spring which is in months of Feb to April because weather is quite pleasant in these days. Moreover, you can enjoy many traditional festival these days.

There are so many places India to explore that list will never end. It depends on how long you are goin...

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Votes
Average: 8.7 (32 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...adiant health and in best of spirits. I couldnt express through words how much i get ex...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... couldnt express through words how much i get excited when I heard the news that ...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
... get excited when I heard the news that youre planning to visit India soon. I was a l...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and there is so much to share with you. I advise you that you should schedule you...
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Line 8, column 107, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'place'
Suggestion: place
...r at least a week. I shall show you all places near my hometown. We shall also revive ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, at least, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4406779661 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22678260241 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0353041811 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8666666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147704268277 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532354391257 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395104730019 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685301474647 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489866983994 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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