Dear Susan,
I am so happy when I received your email in this morning. Today is the beautiful day and how excited when I heard you gonna come here next month.
It is the beginning of autumn in September and the weather is extremely comfortable with gentle sunshine, some sea breezes
and temperature is around twenty-five Celsius. I think that is the most suitable time of the year to visit my country.
Do you remember that I used to tell you about how delicious of traditional food and fantastic beach in Vietnam. We can luxuriate in seawater and then have dinner with numerous seafood at right there. I also take you to traditional market and you can see the life of local citizen in my country. I can't tell you all about attractive plans in this email but you have to try it all. I believe that you are excited with my plans, aren't you?
Oh, I almost forgot to tell you that I and my parent very pleasure if you come and leave with us throughout your vacation in Vietnam.
hope to hear from you soon. Your friend, Mary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable gentle'.
Suggestion: comfortable gentle
... September and the weather is extremely comfortable with gentle sunshine, some sea breezes and tempera...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Celsius' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Celsiuses'.
Suggestion: Celsiuses
... and temperature is around twenty-five Celsius. I think that is the most suitable time...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... life of local citizen in my country. I cant tell you all about attractive plans in ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... this email but you have to try it all. I believe that you are excited with my pl...
^
Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...eve that you are excited with my plans, arent you? Oh, I almost forgot to tell you t...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
... throughout your vacation in Vietnam. hope to hear from you soon. Your friend, Mar...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42105263158 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41231834101 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2057209859 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108853066195 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525608420686 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675277943058 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732996011698 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498045791994 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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