Dear Asiya
Hope my letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I was overjoyed when I heard that you are planning a trip to India in the month of August, the time my country experiences heavy rains throughout. I would like to add to your knowledge that it is actually not a pleasant time to visit India.
Firstly, this time of the year in my country is known as Rainy season and every single part of the country experiences heavy rainfall as the monsoon hits at the same time in the south and also entire northern region encounters western disturbances as well. As you told me in previous letter that you are doing research on Indian topography and wants to visit mountainous region such as Manali, Rohtang, Ladakh and so on. It would be risky if we will visit mountains as probability of landslides dramatically increases in this season. Visiting such areas can be a challenge for you especially in monsoons.
I would suggest you to visit India in the month of October because at that time, the country experiences autumn season which is best and glorious season to pay visits to any part of the country. We can plan our itinerary from Kasauli which is bordered by lower Himalayas to Ladakh which falls in the lap of greater Himalayas. We will cover the entire stretch exploring every village so that you can also have a glimpse and taste of various cultures. Moreover, I’ll plan our itinerary in detail which will cover some of the most beautiful places known for its pristine beauty such as Shimla, Manali, Kullu, Spiti valley, Rohtang Valley, Kashmir, Ladakh and Leh. Also, you’ll get an opportunity to experience local cuisines, traditional wears, interaction with local people and best attractions of these places which will also aid yo finish your thesis work with live experiences.
Lastly, if you’ll delay your plan with just 2 months, I assure you those days are going to be memorable days forever and also when you’ll land here either in August or October, you’re going to stay with me at my home. I have spoken to my family about whole plan and about your stay with me. They, too, are eagerly waiting and glad that you are planning a visit to India.
Hope you’ll re-think on my suggestion and do let me know at the earliest, what would you prefer, so that I can make arrangements accordingly.
Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours lovingly
Alka Bhat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, so, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.03092783505 462% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 32.9175257732 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 26.3917525773 212% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 937.175257732 212% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 420.0 206.0 204% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72142857143 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 3.78020617076 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50789569487 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 127.690721649 176% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 290.88556701 208% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.704896446 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.166666667 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 4.34317383033 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169777740941 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647318699981 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521014332577 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084580381203 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635244300256 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 41.2886597938 223% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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