Dear Sam
Hope my letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. Last time when we talked you told me about how you are struggling in your relationship and also your career. I want to recommend you a book which I read one month ago and the name of the book is “THE SECRET”.
The Secret is basically a motivational book written by famous author Rhonda Byrne. I not only got awestruck by looking at appealing front cover but also the content of the book is absolutely amazing. To begin with, the book focuses on how to use the law of attraction and positivity in daily life. I personally believe if one tactically and wisely use technique of law of attraction, he/she can magnetize every opportunity, happiness and can make wonders in one’s life. Furthermore, author evidently spoke about the wonders she had experienced by religiously following the technique.
I strongly believe that if you’ll read this book and will go by each and every step mentioned in reaching the summit of destination, then definitely you will also achieve your goals in shorter period of time and also you’ll find a way to resolve conflict in your relationships. Also not to forget, this book is also available in video format on youtube for free which makes it even more interesting. However, I’ll suggest to buy this book from amazon as it is available on 10% discount till 31st march.
Hope this book will do magical wonders for you to tackle problems and bring happiness and contentment in your life.
Yours lovingly
Alka Bhat
- Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress and how can we reduce it
- Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time Tell him the best time of the year to come What places they could visit Invite them to come to your house 67
- Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it 81
- Write a letter to the local council about the poor condition of roads in your area Include the following in your letter Explain the situation and roads condition How does it affect you and other people Suggest what measures need to be taken in your opinio 84
- In future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...will also achieve your goals in shorter period of time and also you’ll find a way to resolve c...
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Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...resolve conflict in your relationships. Also not to forget, this book is also availa...
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Line 4, column 414, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest buying'.
Suggestion: suggest buying
...it even more interesting. However, I’ll suggest to buy this book from amazon as it is availabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70169742478 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597744360902 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9758591046 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304231975156 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989955523594 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684114670477 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181697912371 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724428196342 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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