Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress and how can we reduce it
In this modern world, stress has been emerging as one of the biggest issue in different countries and there are many factors which governed the acceptance of this disease among people of different age-groups. There are many evidence which supports my idea.
Firstly, in order to ascend with the fast pace of life, people have more self-centered and selfish. And to compete on professional front with their counterparts, they have chosen abhorrent means to ascend the ladder of success. Sometimes, they grab success but most of the times, they face failures. Moreover, individuals have become so weak spiritually and emotionally that often after encountering big failures, they go into deep depression, stress and anxiety.
Secondly, with the advancement of science, technology and engineering, individuals from head to toe have been completely turned themselves into robots with less or no emotions. They have engineered themselves into much complex alien who is devoid of happiness, contentment and wisdom and webbed themselves with high aspirations and goals .Consequently, they forgot that they can lead a much simpler life away from all these sophisticated hassles. In short, people have lost touch with their inner spiritual voice. That’s the main reason why individuals get shattered so easily and are not able to bear burden of stress and thereby develops neural and psychological ailments.
Researchers have evidently proved the fact that 90% of the world’s population is either suffering from stress or depression of some form. Considering this world as a family, all of us have to take immediate steps to curb this curse. To begin with, some measures should be amended by Judicial system so as to implement rules strictly to be followed by everyone such as big educational institutions, management authorities and Private Organizations. Also we can start it from our homes by monitoring and continuously observing our near and dear ones. We can approach and talk to them if we see that they are perturbed. Furthermore, I believe our 95% will resolve if we lower down our needs and aspirations and lead a simpler, contented and spiritually oriented life. We should inculcate a habit of practicing yoga and meditation everyday for about one hour as it can bring magical wonders to our fast paced life. And also not to forget, we also need to see what we eating as what we eat at the end is responsible for what we thought.
To conclude, it is extremely important to raise an alarm and to constructively work to curb this disease as stress and depression are giving horrific statistics to the world as per researcher’s study. Humans are ultimate creation of God and if this has been created by us, then, definitely the solution of this problem lies with none other than us. I strongly believe by adapting good practices and habits we’ll end this giving rise to a new world devoid of any mental, physical and emotional ailment.
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also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, in short, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 10.4138276553 278% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2464.0 1615.20841683 153% => OK
No of words: 484.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9061105366 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584710743802 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9601381007 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0476190476 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228333335494 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616838137257 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584577200699 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123889671451 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816508350114 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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