In this contemporary world, people nowadays are more inclined towards technology and internet. Technology has not only improved standard of life but also make man feel more comfortable and civilized in society and this is the reason why most of the people extract information, news and updates online. However, I believe that no matter how much we go online to access journals, news and articles. People will never abolish newspapers and books completely. Many people support my opinion whereas others are against it.
The popularity of e-books, e-articles, e-news, etc. have been increasing as the time is passing by. This state or condition of accepting online available material for whatever purpose came into existence with the advancement in technology and well internet availability. Firstly, if I talk about my country, there are people in different age-groups and most of them fall in either old- age or young age. To begin with old-age population which accounts for 55% of Indian population are not hands on how to access a browser. Apart from this, majority of villages, are devoid of internet facility. So, the only choice they left with to buy newspaper or magazine and read them.
Secondly, there are plethora of remote areas or inaccessible regions where government is still working on provision of electricity. How can we even think of internet when basic requirements are yet to fulfill. To keep yourself updated with what is happening around the world can only be done with the help of Newspaper or books available. Undoubtedly, in these scenarios, newspaper and books play an indispensable role to deliver knowledge towards
various issues.
Thirdly, various studies have been conducted by the team of researchers in Lancaster University in London stating that people who seems to be more indulged in completing every tasks online develops redundancy in brain capacity over a period of time as compare to those who don't. Moreover, it not only affects cognitive development but also sensitivity of eye receptors towards light also gets reduced. Apart from this, Cone cells and rod cells present in eye, responsible for proper functioning to retrieve image of an object on cornea also suffers with a prominent disease known as Cataract. Consequently, I believe people are paying nothing when it comes to availability of resources online but in long run, their health is definitely getting affected with the overuse of technological advancements.
To conclude, I think we should not completely replace out traditional means of information such as newspaper and books with e-resources. Nevertheless, newspapers and books do cost us with little amount of money when we have to buy them but they are not costing us with huge monetary loss when we suffered from various eye or brain diseases. Also, both of them have their own merits and de-merits, However, merits overweigh de-merits. People can place their choice choosing newspaper or e-resources depending upon time availability.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ops redundancy in brain capacity over a period of time as compare to those who dont. Moreover,...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... period of time as compare to those who dont. Moreover, it not only affects cognitiv...
^^^^
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t only affects cognitive development but also sensitivity of eye receptors toward...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s depending upon time availability.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, whereas, apart from, i think, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2532.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 480.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.275 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87474334603 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591666666667 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 810.9 506.74238477 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0184357673 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54166666667 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156329335633 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416746843887 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581636431383 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083560653411 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02663844437 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 78.4519038076 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ops redundancy in brain capacity over a period of time as compare to those who dont. Moreover,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... period of time as compare to those who dont. Moreover, it not only affects cognitiv...
^^^^
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t only affects cognitive development but also sensitivity of eye receptors toward...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s depending upon time availability.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, whereas, apart from, i think, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2532.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 480.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.275 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87474334603 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591666666667 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 810.9 506.74238477 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0184357673 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54166666667 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156329335633 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416746843887 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581636431383 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083560653411 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02663844437 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 78.4519038076 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.