Agriculture lays the foundation of every country especially developing countries of the world. However, youth seems to be not much fascinated and interested in this profession because of existence of other high paid professions in this contemporary time.
There are ample of reasons that why youngsters hang up to speak about farming in the society. Firstly, I believe, young generation have least knowledge about traditional and modern farming practices practiced in their region or country. As a result of this, they still have preconceived notions in their mind that this profession is extremely outdated with no or very less income. Also, it requires extensive amount of physical and mental efforts as well.
Secondly, in developing countries like India, Bangladesh, Pakistan, Afghanistan and so on, the main reason why youngsters chose to completely abandoned farming and any other agriculture related practices is the application of outdated farming tools since 1960s. As developing countries are still lacking automated farming machinery and upgraded tools such as drone pest spraying and seed planting techniques, peasants are suffering from a huge monetary loss in such countries. Not only this, the government has set MSP on each crop so as to minimize peasants loss. However, they still do not get minimum amount from buyers or in markets which further constitutes to be another big reason.
Government can play an indispensable role in raising this profession to greater extent by amendment of certain bills, rules and regulations that would not only help farmer’s extreme efforts to receive fruitful results but also incline youngsters towards this laborious yet noble profession. Furthermore, the government should always remember agronomy will only increase if there is inculcation of updated farming tools, chemicals and practices in the field which in turn will automatically magnetize young generation to pursue farming as their main profession.
To conclude, necessary and stringent steps should definitely be taken by government to mold their laws for the betterment of people which is undoubtedly going to mirror huge positive impact on agriculture- based economy and also will prevent youngsters to opt for this profession as a matter of choice and not ancestral driven responsibility.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the least'.
Suggestion: have the least
...y. Firstly, I believe, young generation have least knowledge about traditional and modern ...
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Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...s profession is extremely outdated with no or very less income. Also, it requires ...
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Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...the government has set MSP on each crop so as to minimize peasants loss. However, they s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52394366197 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95827493602 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611267605634 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7586402568 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.846153846 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264694172308 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878751335359 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558239415318 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148153796271 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484120012734 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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