With ramping up criminal activities in the US, especially in the states such as Iowa, Florida, local governments have issued strict orders that prohibits movement of teenagers post 9 PM unless they are with their parents or guardians. I think this decision from the authorities came at the right time to prevent young people from exposure to drugs and also to promote the safety of every individual. I will be discussing about the same in my rest of the essay.
To begin with, drugs exposure has been known to affect the behaviors of all the age groups that consume it. Although it is illegal to sell drugs, there are some agencies who are greedy to make fortune out of this crime at the cost of lives of middle aged children. It has been in the news where a private news channel busted a racket involving folks who tried to lure young people into drugs consumption. This not only makes the drug consumers irresponsible, but also destroy their future which is regretted in the later stages of their life. It is highly unlikely that such addictions are developed when they are accompanied by their caretakers.
Secondly, kidnapping is another crime that is keeping the police department on their toes. An analysis into the reported incidents from the past 5 months show that 78% of this crimes occur during late night hours starting from 10 PM. Victims are found to be falling in the age between 13-19 and an important observation is that they were alone. As per a study on criminal behavior by psychologist Dr. James, culprits tend to exercise caution to commit crimes when the targets are not alone.
To summarise, the US goverment has definitely come up with the right strategy to safeguard the safety of its citizens. However, it is also the responsibility of every adult to adhere to these restrictions which promotes safety of the society. I firmly believe that every individual should understand the seriousness of such imposed laws and doing so can contribute to downfall in the rate of crimes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, i think, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84057971014 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63223518056 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611594202899 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3813612172 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169617415103 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470447777645 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339834867735 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891019288408 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260377428858 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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