In some areas in the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night, unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
Certain regions in the United States of America have introduced curfew hours at night, during which teenagers are prohibited to roam around freely on their own. While such policies may protect the children from illegal activities, the question is if this the solution to growing crime rates?
The most compelling reason for such restrictions could be due to high crime rates in certain areas. Teenagers under 16 often fall prey to mugging, rape, drug abuse and scams despite of the best effort from their parents and community they live in. Furthermore, experiencing such events could disturb them mentally and physically at a tender age and cause negative impact that could be brought into their adulthoods. Whereas such rules would help to reduce their exposure to illicit activities, they may also help to make the best use of their time for studies.
Despite the aforementioned arguments, I firmly believe such restrictions may not always work and only solve part of the problem. What If a teenager decide to sneak out of the house without informing their primary care givers? Such restriction would not work in every situation, there may be a sudden need or medical emergency where a 15 year old have to step outside. As criminal activities happen during the day as well as the night, teenagers may still fall in trap to such activities. If the government genuinely wants to solve this problem then they need to step up the law enforcement levels in the areas high crime rates.
To conclude with, curfew hours for teenagers might not be a complete remedy to the law and order problem in the United States. While such measures may work as a short term solution, in long run policy makers have to look at big picture rather than restricting movements of teenagers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, may, so, still, then, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95986622074 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55883225511 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605351170569 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.8474311275 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.076923077 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138874353774 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050909295196 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335358733965 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876107496464 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178703202188 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.