Based on a strict regulation which is called Curfew, American teenagers are not allowed to show up for any outdoor activities in some section of the united states after a particular time unless they will be accompanied by an adult. In my perspective, although this rule benefits teenagers' safety level, It would also bring some undesirable impact for these teens, which will be all discussed further in this essay based on some valid and potent instances.
To embark upon, some sections in the united states lack adequate safety level for teens who do not have acceptable awareness of how some issues can affect their lives adversely. It is widely believed that some sections in the US are filled up with drug dwellers and criminals who are equipped with guns that can offer teens lives hazardous dangers. Consequently, for keeping, this vulnerable group of society safe and sound US government pass this serious rule to tackle this problematic issue.
Despite the merits this rule can offer, I am of the viewpoint that these types of regulations would swallow teenagers independence and confidence. Along with this, they can be affected by the feeling of being worry all time about the neighborhood they are living in. To cite an example, let me illustrate a fact about a 16-year old American boy who has affected by this rule. He claimed, from the time that we should follow this rule we are in an unfavorable zone of anxiety. He added we desire to be outside and explore how a nightlife would be, however, we do not have this chance to enjoy night gatherings with our friends. Further and more importantly, I believe making decisions for teens will not allow them to improve their critical thinking and problem-solving skills.
By way of conclusion, whilst this rule absolutely holds some virtues, adolescents might also be at risk of losing some main characteristics such as being self-assured about what they do in their lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96319018405 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72903406605 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592024539877 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6190807654 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.833333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315242105814 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111865223661 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867911100773 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19245222362 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786143414789 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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