Unequal distribution of wealth is a serious economic concern for many countries across the globe. It is quite evident that wealthier people go on accumulating more wealth as against the people who live below the poverty line, whose fortune is always in the diminishing trend. What are all the causes of this economic phenomenon?
and How this can be resolved? This essay will discuss the reason and solution for this problem in detail.
Factors that contribute to this undesirable trend are many ranging from personal and social to political. Firstly, the poorer section of the community does not have access to the quality of education that most upper-class people get. This either prevents them from or act as a barrier to landing in high paid jobs. Secondly, low-class people most of the time doing unskilled jobs, eventually, earning mere incomes. This is due to the fact that they neither have access to loans from financial institutions or banks in order to start their own business even it is of smaller in size nor the qualifications to undertake skilled jobs that pay huge income. Finally, various government schemes that are intended for the growth of people under the poverty line never reaches their hands due to the colossal proportions of corruptions by the greedy politicians.
Eradicating this huge income and wealth gap is the primary responsibility of any government. It must take steps to provide high-quality education to people all across the country at an affordable price so that it can be availed even by the lower income groups. Consequently, it will help them to get a skilled job in the future, thereby, they will overcome poverty. Furthermore, eradicating corruptions from the country and promoting welfare measure for equal distribution of wealth will be the other solutions that should have to be focused upon by the state. By doing so black money could be pulled out and can be put to use for legitimate causes.
In conclusion, imbalanced income distribution is the primary concern that hinders the growth of any country. Unless, the law-makers take steps to rule out the causes like differences in quality of education that rich and poor receives, access to financial aids and corruptions in the system, this unappealing trend cannot be prevented.
Moreover, by implementing corrective measures like spreading first-class education to all income groups, tightening laws to curb undisclosed economic activities involving bribes and manipulations, the government can very well overcome this hurdle and set an example to other nations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21204819277 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88000701601 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546987951807 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0371790837 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.842105263 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221014002394 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722781709962 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764500235366 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120284687027 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061472751802 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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