Global warming is the most serious issue that world is facing today .what are the cause .what measures government of individual take to tackle this issue. | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Global warming is the most serious issue that world is facing today .what are the cause .what measures government of individual take to tackle this issue.

The pressure of global warming is harmful for all world due to human activities .it is increase day by day .this essay will discuss upcoming paragraphs .

To begin with , rising in gree house gases the main reason because population increaseing nowaday due to people have lot of desars due to people do deforestation for make house .with this increasing carban oxygen with this affect respiratory .moreover , developing industrilization in all world due to rise industry smoke with this industry releasing of chemical waste in water and exploitation of natural resources such as, water, patrol , tree , and so on . furthermore , people use of private transport with this growing traffic day by day . as a result , human activities are the main causes of global warming .

To begin with, nemourous point can be solve the problem government should be make a new rule and people follow this role .when don't follow rule.government should be ban industry .moreover, affarestration by people due to increase oxygen .and people should follow the one child policy .as a result , it is good way for control this problem

To conclusion , nowadays global warming Mani iusse of all world .so government and people equal responsibility to curb this problem .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, such as, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92572275593 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.671571799 49.4020404114 368% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 209.6 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132802829345 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890661088377 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428109454657 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102750603356 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403493090641 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.0946893788 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, such as, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments