Government should spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students, rather than supporting professional sports and art performances for the general public. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
It is believed that regimes should concentrate to enhance the better sports and art facilities in schools instead of spending money on the programs to provide entertainment to the people. I agree with the former view.
Admittedly, in some situations or places, it is necessary to spend some money on the events for the enjoyment of the general public. The one main reason to consider behind is that political parties do it to increase their vote bank. With the concerts and sports programs, political leaders win the faith of people and promote their party without spending the single penny of the party budget. However, in reality, it is the need of the hour to spend money for the promotion of the sports, arts and culture in the schools to produce the skilled persons which will really help to raise the economic and social slandered of the nation.
Undeniably, there are so many benefits of spending money in the schools for the development of sports and art culture. The first and foremost reason behind is that schools kids are the future of the nation. It becomes the social obligation of the regime to provide the better sports facilities at the school level to inculcate the habit and interests for the sports and art, which they can adopt as a profession in the future. Another reason to consider is that nowadays, school children are getting depressed owing to the burden of the study. They cannot spare time for playing sports because they always get busy to fulfil the school's tasks, here it is the responsibility of the governments to spend money to construct the great sports infrastructure in schools so that students can keep them away from the worries and tensions of study.
To conclude, although spending money on the concerts and sports tournaments is also imperative for the social causes, however, governments should consider more to spend money to promote the sports and art culture at schools to produce the better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... on the events for the enjoyment of the general public. The one main reason to consider behind...
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Line 5, column 732, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...s to spend money to construct the great sports infrastructure in schools so that stude...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91515151515 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56471071406 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469696969697 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5905489992 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372544816783 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139409809845 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10061627123 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242322500976 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468849576151 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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